Very nice work once again, I love how you manage to give alot of your works an excellent textured feeling. It potrays a since of emotion and almost puts you in the picture. Look forward to seeing more of your stuff, your becoming my favorite artist on D.A. with these simple, but powerful peices.
I understand you were looking for advanced critique on this piece, so perhaps I shouldn't have made a comment at all. In my humble opinion, this couldn't get much better. It's simply more of a state of mind than anything else, and it reflects so many emotions, at least in me ... which is the whole purpose of art in the first place.